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12-21-2007, 07:55 PM
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This song I wrote...
I hope you like it ^_^
This Heart
(My heart…)
I can see
The tears forming,
I can feel them
Streaming
Inside my heart is screaming!
I’ve fallen down
And I can’t get back up on my own!
I need,
I need!
I need your help!
This heart beats for only so long!
My heart bleeds
For no one but you!
This heart aches
For yours!
My heart; it breaks,
Every time I see you hurt!
This heart is full
I don’t think I can take anymore hurt!
My heart;
It belongs to you!!
It belongs to you…
I have come to fear
The sound of my heart beating
Because when you’re near
It just beats faster and faster
And when you’re near
There’s no greater feeling that I could possibly feel!!
I need your help!
This heart beats for only so long!
My heart bleeds
For no one but you!
This heart aches
For yours!
My heart; it breaks,
Every time I see you hurt!
This heart is full
I don’t think I can take anymore hurt!
My heart;
It belongs to you!!
It belongs to you…
It belongs to you!!
And after all we’ve been through,
We’re still here today!!!!!!!!
{My heart belongs to you!!!}
No one but you….
{This heart bleeds for you!!!}
My heart bleeds for you!!
{FOR YOU!!!!}
I need your help!
This heart beats for only so long!
My heart bleeds
For no one but you!
This heart aches
For yours! (And yours alone!)
My heart; it breaks,
Every time I see you hurt!
This heart is full
I don’t think I can take anymore hurt!
My heart;
It belongs to you!!
It belongs to you…
I need your help!
This heart beats for only so long!
My heart bleeds
For no one but you!
This heart aches
For yours!
My heart; it breaks,
Every time I see you hurt!
This heart is full
I don’t think I can take anymore hurt!
My heart;
It belongs to you!!
It belongs to you…
(This heart…)
Beats for only so long…
My heart
Lives for you…
(For you…)
Only for you….
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12-21-2007, 07:57 PM
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p.s.- Sorry it's so long....
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12-23-2007, 08:06 PM
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Wow! Did not realize you were a poet, girl! Great job!
Need to put your name on it so somebody else doesn't take it.
Wondering how the music would go....
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12-24-2007, 02:22 PM
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Ooooo I like it a lot. I write all the time. Songs, poems, stories ect. 
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12-25-2007, 02:18 AM
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Wow, that was nice. You have great choice in words. Have you been a songwriter ever since?..or your just starting now?..Well cheers to you.
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12-28-2007, 10:07 PM
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Originally Posted by neighbor
Wow, that was nice. You have great choice in words. Have you been a songwriter ever since?..or your just starting now?..Well cheers to you.
Thank you,I've been writing since I was 10, I'm 14 now, thank you again ^_^
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12-28-2007, 10:10 PM
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Thank you all for taking the time to read it, I really appreciate it!!!
Oh, yeah, this songs to me, Bobbie and my band Riot!, do not steal it, we will cry (even though we have copies of it ^_^)
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12-28-2007, 10:12 PM
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Originally Posted by QueenAngie
Wow! Did not realize you were a poet, girl! Great job!
Need to put your name on it so somebody else doesn't take it.
Wondering how the music would go....
Thank you, I write alot ^_^
I will put my name on it ^_^
It's kind of sad and rock, in my head it sounds really good ^_^
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12-29-2007, 10:38 PM
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You should share with Grandpa. He mentioned paying for guitar lessons for you. I think he's waiting to see if you're serious about going or not. This aught to show him!
You're something else Bobbie! Nice job!!
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12-30-2007, 09:12 PM
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I should!! What's his e-mail?
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